Waiting and tormenting

So, the little excerpt from the beginning of the story I'm writing for a friend... I changed it twice since then and am still trying to get the flow, trying to get into the story. Alas everything I write is stupid and doesn't make sense. The dialogue is all wrong, the details are confusing and it all sounds dumb-downed from what I know I can write (coughthepirate'sgamecough).
AHHHHHH.
This story is driving me insane, but I need to write it, since I already promised her by mid-September I would have it finished. Damn deadlines.

'The Jungle' is still a boring book to me. I'm trying to get through it so I can read, 'The Basic Eight' by Daniel Handler next. I ordered it off Half.com. Four dollars cheaper than anywhere else since I don't feel like wasting gas money and all that jazz to buy a 13-dollar book from Barnes and Noble.

I have my heart set on a new laptop. I'm thinking of going MAC, but what I remember from my High School days where all they had were cheap ones, I'm not quite so sure I wanna venture there.
So, I may go PC.
Then, I have my heart set on KH 2 Final Mix.
http://www.play-asia.com/paOS-13-71-43-77-8-49-en-70-1smf.html
AHHHHHHH, I WANT IT!!!
Kingdom Hearts captures my heart over and over and over...
TOO BAD IT WENT OUT OF PRINT BEFORE I COULD GET IT.
THIS PISSES ME OFF.
Some fat boy is enjoying it over some bag of pretzels.